
some days
i need your love to wash over me
removing the grievances
that are tattooed deep within my soul
then smooth the craggy edges
that remain from my failures
and disappointments
some days
i need your song to wash over me
keeping me contained
in its unrelenting gentleness
in harmony
with a symphony of cleansing
that only exists
in the silence of rushing water
until the polished essence that remains
is all that is me
wrap me then
in the sound and energy
that brings me life
and renewed love
some days
i need your love to wash over me
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"then smooth the craggy edges." Looooove it.
ReplyDeleteThe repeated phrase 'some days' is a very effective device, here, Mario. The message of the piece is simultaneously inviting and soothing, reassuring. As ever, you have put me in a better mood than before my arrival and reading. I really love your work.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem! Very nice!
ReplyDeletehttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/25/one-she-beckons-me-come-2/
the longing is evidently shown, strong verse,
ReplyDeletewell done.
Absolutely beautiful...both picture and piece!!!!
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love coming to your site, Mario. Once again, a wonderfully beautiful poem and photo. Marvelous. Just marvelous.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written and what a spectacular photo - wonderful to be able to see such beauty all the time.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely photo and poem, it washes away any disappointments from the soul :)
ReplyDeleteI never know what to say about your poetry - repeatedly saying 'I love this' seems trite, but I do. I can't even pick out a favourite line because it all works so well!
ReplyDeleteamazing post! u've done really excellent job!! thanks a lot for sharing with us.
ReplyDeleteexcellent photography! I've found lots of nice work on your blog. thanks a lot for sharing with us.
ReplyDeleteThis is mind blowing,
ReplyDeletelove you for writing such heart warming piece.
How are you today?
Happy end of November!
Appreciated your support to our poetry picnic,
Hope to see you share today,
A random poem or old poem will do the wonders too.
Your talent rocks.
Hope to see you in.
xoxox